You've got something good right there
You just need to polish it.
I mean , you obviously got the idea of how to animate, now take a step forward and spend some more time into it, add backgrounds, storyline, sound effects and you are ready to go!!.
You dont even need to change the characters couse you obviously know what you are doing, i mean there are some pretty good animations with surrealistic characters, just work a little on the tweens, you almost got the FBF part, all you need to do is spend more time into it.
-SaintShun